Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other while other think that people have become more independent.discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is irrefutable fact that in
this
contemporary era, everybody depends on each other in order to survive in modern culture.
However
, there are different type of opinion whether nowadays people have become independent or relay on others
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put my forth partially
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thus both
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Thus both
the views will be analysed in the following paragraphs before reasoned a conclusion is drawn. To commence with
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examining the former perspective the primary argument the supporters would put forward is that nowadays as people are busy in their hectic schedule
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they tend to get help from others to do daily routine.
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is to say A married couple
are
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unable to fulfil their own necessity by themselves
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in a resulting they need aid from each other.
secondly
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Secondly
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students found a convenient way of education is technology
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Therefor, they fully
relay
have confidence or faith in
rely
on the advancement of technology in order to get their desire goal and it make their study easy
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On the other hand
, the latter view suggests that In
this
modernized era, there is ongoing debate on individual have become independent
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Firstly
, people want to fulfil their needs by themselves
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By
this
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
mean that if person find difficulty in his or her office work
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than
he or she can solve it by getting help from the internet rather than depending on another mankind.
Secondly
, in
this
globe generally people have become more knowledgeable so that they can have a satisfied job and allocate their income on fundamental requirements as well for luxuriate things. Conclusively
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reiterate my opinion by saying that actually it depends on situations in which people need aid from others when it comes on committed people to daily routine whilst, they can Easily survive independently by doing a job in
this
globe.
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