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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is indeed that the people living in the abroad used to have a verbal
communication
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 in a foreign
language
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. Some intellectuals opine that these practices of the secondary
language
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 may not only introduce the social problem, but
also
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 elevate the practical problems. I agree with the above notion.
To begin
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 with, the other
language
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 may impose a hazardous impact on an individual’s social life. The diverse languages are representing their cultures of origin.
Consequently
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, the foreign
language
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 might resist a person to socialize with other people due to differences in their
language
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.
Moreover
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, many introvert people could not share their views to others due to the barrier of verbal
communication
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.
This
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 lack of
communication
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 causes many social problems to the people.
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, the scarce knowledge of the German
language
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 prevents the English man to socialize with others.
As a result
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, his loneliness will deter his emotional health and at worst; causes the depression.
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, the social life of a person greatly relies on his comfort at a
language
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.
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, the practical problems are
also
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 accelerated to the aviation of the
language
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. In abroad, a layman has to conduct his conversation in that aboriginal
language
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.
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, in many situations he has to suffer from the misinterpretation, as well as unaware of the
language
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.
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, the salesman in abroad could not perform the better with the conversation with his clients in the foreign
language
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.
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, many students at abroad could not inculcate their interpersonal skills due to their limits of verbal
communication
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 in other languages. In conclusion, the nature of an individual predominantly dependent on his mother
language
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.
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, a person learns the other
language
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 at compatible level, his performance would lags at many sections due to a foreign
language
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. To eliminate
such
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 a negative side, one should enrich his knowledge of that other
language
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.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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