Improving living conditions within society is a far superior approach to crime prevention than the treat of punishment. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement and why?

The twenty-

first

century has been a rapid rise in the number of crimes all over the globe.

As a result

, one of the main aims of the government is to find the best

way

of

crime

prevention. From my point of view,

although

punishing criminals might temporarily reduce

crime

, improving living conditions may prevent reason to make a

crime

at all.

This

essay will support

this

view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, the majority of criminals make crimes due to the lack of money. To put it another

way

, some people think that there is the only

way

to survive in our expensive world is to be a thief, burglar or fraud. In

this

case, a large number of crimes can prevent by improving population life conditions.

For example

, recently the problem of unemployment has become quite popular among young people. Eventually, some parts of unemployed youth despair and choose the easiest

way

to earn money through

crime

.

That is

why if

Accept comma addition

why, if

the government gives more opportunities to find a job, increases the average salary, and supports citizens, the crimes would be prevented.

On the other hand

, many support the view that making

crime

is a disease.

In other words

, some criminals are mentally ill people, who live only to make a

crime

. I believe that

this

type of person has to be put into prisons or hospitals. To show an example, paedophilia

does not stop

Suggestion

do not stop

after improving living conditions, the only solution

for

Suggestion

to

this

terrible

crime

is to punish criminals.

Nevertheless

, to prevent a large proportion of the

crime

the government needs to revise population living standards. Taking everything into account, despite some of the perceived benefits from the punishment of the criminals, I still believe that the best solution to reduce

crime

is to improve people’s living conditions.