some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue working after the age of 65. However, others say there shouldn’t be a limitation on the age and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of their age. Discuss both views and give an opinion.
Recently there has been much interest in gaining a better understanding of the limitation of the working
age
. Some feel that no one
should be allowed to work
once they reach at the age
of 65. However
, I agree with those who are of the opinion that there should not be any restriction on the working age
. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the rationale for both viewpoints as well as adduce all the arguments which might support my own belief.
They who espouse the former opinion claim that working at
Suggestion
in
one
position for longer period of time will effect
the national economy. The proponents of have an effect upon
affect
this
view maintain that when an individual works at the one
position for his/her entire life, then
he/she will reduce the chances of job openings for newer generations. If more and more young people don't acquire a work
opportunity, they will be indirectly affect
the economy of the country. Maybe there is some truth in Suggestion
affected
this
claim, and some empirical evidence can be provided to support it. A 2007 study, for instance
, conducted by a team of researchers at the University of Toronto found that the majority of the food companies in the same country were not able to up-lift
their production after they introduced a law that allowed an employee to being or located on or directed toward the side of the body to the west when facing north
left
work
after their retriement
. the state of being retired from one's business or occupation
retirement
This
chance impacted significantly toward labour job
in Canada.
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a labour job
labour jobs
Nonetheless
, one
can argue that there is more to the story than this
research tells. Personally, I firmly believe that no one
should impose limtation
of working Suggestion
limits
limitation
limitations
age
because elderly folks need to pay ongoing expenses. In general, there are many people who are not contributing towards their retirement
plans or pension plans because of their ongoing bills in this
modern world. If we limit the working age
, then
these people would not be able to survive after their retirement
. My uncle, Ben, is a shining example of this
. Ben, who suffered from many heart related diseases during his young age
, so he was not able to save any money for his later age
. After takking
very attractive; capturing interest
taking
retirement
from his work
, he relized
that he successfully completed or brought to an end
realized
realised
didn't had
any money left Suggestion
didn't have
for
his future life. Suggestion
in
Therefore
, he was forced to migrate to Mexico, where he could work
even after retirement
period.
To sum up, although
having strict retirement
rule might help some young generation to enter into work
force. Nevertheless
, I still hold to the opinion that everyone needs money for their expenditure even after they become old. Thus
, they should be continued to allowed
to Suggestion
allow
work
regardless of their age
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