The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may as many as 29 million vehicle on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduce to control car ownership and use. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly there
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Undoubtedly, there
is
huge increment
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a huge increment
in
number
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the number
of cars in
last couple
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the last couple
of
decade
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decades
, which certainly creates
problem
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problems
a problem
to
environment
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the environment
and society. I agree that
such
laws should be
introduce
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introduced
to restrict the private
cars
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car
car's
ownership and public
transport
facilities should be
improve
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improved
.
Firstly Air
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Firstly, Air
pollution, which has become a huge problem for all, is mainly
increases
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increasing
increased
due to
transport
emission. Several studies
shows
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show
have shown
that private cars
has
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have
major source
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a major source
of contribution
in
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to
air pollution.
Although
some developed countries have appreciated public
transport
system which may attract people to use it
instead
of personal
cars but
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cars, but
there is no stringent law to control the private
cars
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car
numbers.
That is
why we have seen, younger generation still prefers to use personal vehicle
instead
. For an
example children
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example, children
example child
example child child
want
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wants
to go
by
obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
buy
cars
instead
of
school bus
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the school bus
to
showoff
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show off
their luxury.
Secondly
Use of personal
transport
may lead people lazy, lack of physical exercise will lead to
health problem
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health problems
a health problem
such
as obesity, high blood pressure and cardiac problems. It is proved that the person who walks average 5 Km daily will have less chances of heart attack. With
use
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the use
of
alternate form
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alternate forms
an alternate form
the alternate form
of
transport
it will help to reduce the risk as well as saving of fossil fuels. With reduce number of private cars, the demand of petrol and diesel will
also
reduce,
this
will lead
to save
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to saving
non renewable resource of energy
for example
petroleum and crude oil. In conclusion, The international laws to control the number of private
vehicle
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vehicles
will support society economically and
also
support
clean environment
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a clean environment
. All countries should make
such
laws that should be valid for all.

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