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music
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listen
any type of perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
music
it gives relief to their minds. In that way music
is need
for every human being.
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world, there
music
is there. In every country
has own traditional music
. It is more popular in own country
. It is more important than the international music
. Because in that music
people heared
own traditional lyrics and traditional words. Traditional detected or perceived by the sense of hearing
heard
music
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country
. Because music
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country, therefore
therefore
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music
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is dominating traditional and local music
. Because present days traditional music
is coming out and mix up with international music
. So, people's are attractive and addicted to that music
. Traditional music
is fulley
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fully
music
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most famous western music
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this
pop music
and hooked to this
music
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first
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music
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music
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melodic
music
a lot. No one can beat this
music
because that is
the power of melodious music
. Most of the time I listen
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hear
music
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traditional
music
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music
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benefits
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getting higher or more vigorous
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english
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