Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

In the meantime, Many countries bring different types of foods from overseas countries.
some
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Some
people believe that traditional
food
has more positive impact on
environment
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the environment
, and it
is increase
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is increasing
has increased
increases
the income for the society.
Actually
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Actual
number of disadvantages more than the benefits.
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essay will
discus
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
both of them in detail.
Firstly
,
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,
When governments encourage companies to buy foods from global market
,
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,
they create new opportunities for jobs.
In addition
to, they make competitions between
a
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an
actuality plethora of brand in the market, and it
give
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gives
people varieties of
same kind
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the same kind
of foods, and they can select which will be better for them.
as
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As
example research
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example, research
reported that many companies hired more that thousand employees in Cairo
last
year, as governments allow
to
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for
them to increase
number
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the number
of
exports
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export
food
to Cairo.
However
, The
food
coming from far way is so expensive and cost a lot of money to bring it.
Also
shipment companies put high fees on
food
exports
,
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,
while the traditional foods are
more fresh
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fresher
than the foods coming from outside, and it is so
sheep
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cheep
.
as
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As
it available for all levels of people.
for
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For
instance magazines
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instance, magazines
spread
news
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the news
last
year and mentioned increasing of
number
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the number
of traditional restaurants in Egypt.
Moreover
, If we allow to buy many
food
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foods
from far away, it will need to use many thousands of vans and flights for transporting process, which increase the level of pollution in
environment
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the environment
.
the
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The
exports
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export
food
include
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includes
preservatives which have negative effects on health, and maximize the obesity in bodies.
as
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As
example Cairo considered one of the highest polluted cities around the world, as there are many lorries transport foods markets located in Cairo. To sum up
,
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,
the counties and governments
must to minimize
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must minimize
to buy
food
exports, due to save the environment
for
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from
pollution. If they depend on local foods
,
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,
it will have a significant impact on their revenue.
they
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They
also
can make media campaigns to push and encourage people to but traditional foods.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon emissions
  • transportation
  • environmentally friendly
  • economically beneficial
  • local farmers
  • local economy
  • fresher
  • nutritious
  • food security
  • imports
  • preserving
  • traditional farming practices
  • biodiversity
  • limited variety
  • availability
  • cost
  • contributor
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