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Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign language is in order to trawel or to work in foreign country. Others say that this are not only the reason why someone should learn foreign language. Discuss both this views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
 highly competitive era, international languages have become very significant in order to carry out multinational business. Some individuals argue that to learn a foreign language is essential for the purpose
such
 as travelling and working into another nation whereas others perspective towards another various reasons. Withstanding, I certainly vote for the former group.
Thus
, both the views will be analysed in the following paragraph before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. To commence with, there are ample of reasons why people have a fascination to learn foreign dialect for travel and work.
Firstly
, when a person wants to migrate at abroad and will be doing a job over there, he has to learn language which is used in a nation where he is going to settle down. In a resulting, he or she can communicate comfortably with notions of that place as well as with colleagues and will not suffer from isolation as he or she familiar with that sound.
Secondly
, the people who are immigrated can not face major difficulty to survive in different countries.
For instance
, if the Indians want to settle in Canada
then
 they must learn french and English languages as it is widely spot there. On the flip side, there are another myriad factors which are
also
 crucial for knowing several foreign languages.
First
 and foremost, in own country, the person who is hired as a translator in one multinational organisation has to know more than one vocabulary as its his or her job. Exemplify, in India, employer has to explain the whole presentation in English to the people who come from other MNC of various nations. Conclusively,
although
 learning a foreign language is required for migration and settle down at abroad yet, I would say it is rather essential for other reasons like job of translator in highly qualified company in one's own country.
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