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What factors have contributed most to the increase of international travel?

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We live in a word where there are so many options for travelling. According to a recent article, there has been an increase in international travelling. Since the article did not find the major causes of what is causing
this
 new trend, I decided to raise two
crucially
Suggestion
crucial
 important factors which could presumably contribute to
this
. It cannot be denied that we take most means of transport for granted and flying on a plane is becoming more prevalent. In comparison to the previous century, the cost of airline tickets has noticeably decreased.
In other words
, most airlines are now aiming at a wide range of public. Not only do they want to attract the affluent, but they
also
 want to ensure that even the poorest citizens can afford to buy a ticket.
Moreover
, the convenience of aircraft
also
 plays a vital role as flying is not so time-consuming. Another potential factor is
global business
Suggestion
a global business
the global business
 and trade. The majority of successful companies,
such
 as Foxconn and Apple, are spread out into the whole world. If they did not do
this
, they would not be able to satisfy their customers.
Therefore
, they often have no other option, but to dispatch their representatives who always travel by plane.
Secondly
, the world economy has reached its peak,
that is
 to say, our population is buying more cars. To sum up, as far as I am concerned, global business plays a bigger role when it comes to the increase in travelling. Despite the fact that means of transport have changed, companies have a major impact. To make it clear, companies have the power to shape our society. We are under the influence of them. They set down the rules in terms of new trends in our society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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