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Some people think it is the responsibility for government to ensure the people have healthy lifestyle. Other think people should have a free for their own lifestyle decision. Discusse both view and give your opinion.

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No
one
 can deny that, Healthy
lifestyle
 become
one
 of the top topics discussed on all kinds of media these days. A group in the
community
 believes that the
government
 should be in control to make all the
community
’s members have
healthy
Suggestion
a healthy lifestyle
healthy lifestyles
lifestyle
, while, the other group believes that, freedom of choice should be given to all. In
this
 essay I will discuss both of
these point
Suggestion
these points
this point
 of views and support the later group.
First
 and Foremost, Apply control
by
Suggestion
of
government
 on
community
Suggestion
the community
 to have a healthy
lifestyle
 will not be
the easy
Suggestion
the easiest
 job by any means. To illustrate,
government
 should focus on facilitating the life of all, starting from securing the basics like; food and work, until keeping the
community
 safe by making the
violance
a wicked or evil person; someone who does evil deliberately
villains
balance
 incidents at minimum levels.
In contrast
, if
government
Suggestion
the government
 starts to impose healthy
lifestyle
 programs for the society, the
govermnet
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 will get exhausted due to the endless discussions that will be generated by the different segments of the
community
.
On the other hand
, when members of the
community
has
Suggestion
have
 the freedom to choose the healthy
lifestyle
 as the best option to spend their life without
deseses
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
 of
obesty
more than average fatness
obesity
 and its consequences, no
one
 will suffer.
For example
,
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
 people prefer these days
to spend
Suggestion
spend
 more time with their family while they travel or make outdoor trips which will need a healthy body to enjoy all activities together without restrictions or limitation due to bad health
contations
the prevailing context that influences the performance or the outcome of a process
conditions
. In a nutshell,
government
 should focus on their important role of securing the best supplies to all
community
 members away from controlling their
lifestyle
 and let them choose the healthy
one
 as a fruit of their knowledge of the benefits of
healthy
Suggestion
a healthy lifestyle
lifestyle
.
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