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Prohibition of fossil fuel using cars should be realized, instead the ones work with electricity should take their place.

#prohibition #fuel #cars #ones #work #electricity #place
From my point of vie
w
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view, this
this
 initiation would result positive changes in the world. There are two main reasons that I want to emphasize.
Firstly
, electric cars are
mo
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is
re eco-fri
endly th
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friendlier
an the others.
Secondly
, there is a risk that resource of fossil
fuel
 will end after a period. Electric cars are environmentally friendly.Utilization of
this
 kind of cars doesn’t yield in production of carbon dio
xide which ca
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dioxide, which
uses global warming that has become one of the biggest problem today.
Moreover
, if we pay attention to the purity of fossil
fuel
, we’ll see that some con
tains ot
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contain
her chemicals which will be found in the nature at the end, and no one can assure that they don’t have damages for
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in
e nature. Electricity resources are richer than fossil fuels’. For
mation of
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The formation
 fossil fuels takes billions of years and they will be consumed completely one day,
on the con
trary electricity is
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contrary, electricity
 another state of energy, it means electricity can be gotten from different energy sources.
For ins
tance by tr
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instance, by
ansformation of renewable energies it is feasible to produce electrical energy by some processes which are easier and cheaper than obtaining fossil fuels. To sum up I have good thoughts about
this
 idea. I strongly believe that replacement of
fuel
 cars by electric cars will end up less harm to env
ironment an
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the environment
d reduce dependence on
fuel
.

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