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You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

#course #country #accommodation #provider
Dear
mith
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math
, My name is
mandee
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Sandee
 and
i
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 am a student of 3months long accounting programme at st.
clair
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Clair
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 college of
canada
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Canada
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. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with
apartment
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the apartment
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 arrangement provided by you.through
this
 letter i want to bring your attention
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very
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 serious problem of noise facing
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me these days.Everything is perfect apart from the playground opposite my
appartment
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apartment
 which is always busy and
croweded
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crowded
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 children.Which
utlimately
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ultimately
 create
distrubance
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disturbance
 in my studies so
i
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 cannot able to concentrate properly. I would be very grateful to you can look at
this
mattwe
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matter
 and change my
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accommodation
on
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some
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another place. I am looking forward to hearing from your at
earliest
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convience
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convenience
.
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Yours
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Your
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 sincerely Mandeep
akur
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Kaur
Thakur

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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