In some area of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

It is often argued that the teenagers are banned to go outside after a deep
night
without their parents’ permission.
Although
walking under the bright lights in the street are safe, I personally believe that youth students should follow what adults say.
First
of all, it would be
committed
Suggestion
committing
a crime if they are outside at
night
. When they go out without knowing their parents or any other guardians, they could be targeted by criminals.
For example
, homeless people approach them and might sell some drugs
such
as weed or more and
then
students abuse those drugs as a curiosity.
This
consequence might be increasing the crimes in our society.
Furthermore
, sexual assaults would increase for female
students particularly
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students, particularly
because some alcohols or drugs make people lose their control. So, female students cannot resist that criminals.
Secondly
, it might be illegal when they go out at
night
in some states. People who are under 18 are not
legal
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legally
adult in a law, so they must be protected by guardians.
For instance
, if they have an accident, their parents should take care of them
such
paying money for injuries because youth people cannot afford to pay. It seems like they are permitted to go out when their guardians with them. In conclusion, young people of being outside are forbidden after a specific time at
night
with no permission by their adults. The adults should lead and protect their children from any hazard because
this
is what the parents’ obligation to take care of their lovely children.
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