the two maps below show an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
The bar chart demonstrates the proportions of Catholic residents in six various countries over a 3-year
period
(2010-2013).
Overall
, it is apparent that the levels of Catholic dwellers in China, India and Japan underwent an upward trend, while
those in the Philippines, Vietnam and Korea experienced falling
pattern within three years. The Philippines had the highest rates of Correct article usage
a falling
Catholics
, with Japan, having the lowest number of Catholics
throughout this
period
.
As for the countries with the highest proportions of Catholics
, the figure in the Philippines, which stood at roughly 76 million in 2010 decreased slightly at
72 Change preposition
to
m
in 2013. In contrast
, India had a dramatic increase from 10,5 m
to 19 m
till the end of the period
. Likewise
, the levels of Catholic residents in China were 9 m
in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
before rising moderately from 6 m
in 2013.
With regards to the lowest rates of Catholics
, those in Vietnam and Japan were more or less the same from 2010 to 2013 (around 5,5 m
and 500,000, respectively). The number of Catholics
is
residing in Korea, which was 5,3 Unnecessary verb
apply
m
in 2010 had a slight decline at
1,3 Change preposition
to
m
at the end
of the period
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