Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
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Perhaps, the major factor here is a family who belongs to low-paid wages, which is the most primary reason behind poverty. By Linking Words
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, it leads minors to get involved in illegal activities and result in an illicit. To exemplify, a recent online survey of World Education Organisation said that, 60 percent of the youngsters were involved in the illegitimate who had not accomplished minimal education and Linking Words
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, he or she could not pay attention to their child, in that case, the juvenile suffers from emotional and mental imbalance and certainly attracts the bad company.
Turning to possible solutions, if the government invests their state funding on student fees so that they can consider receiving higher education and better job opportunity in the future. If we took Linking Words
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To conclude, poverty and single parents tend to be the major causes. A coordinated response from society and a guardian may lessen the severity of the solution.Linking Words
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