It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

#city #life #countryside

Nowadays people have

choise

the person or thing chosen or selected

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choices

choose

live in

city

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the city

cities

countryside

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some people have arguments why

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are

finer to live in

city

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the city

a city

cities

but some prefer

countryside

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the countryside

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we know both of them has their advantages and disadvantages.

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is very interesting why people choose each place to live.

Firstly I

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Firstly, I

want to talk about

city

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the city

cities

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consist

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consists

many

kind

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kinds

of area but I mean

city

in general.

town

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The town

Town

has many superiority

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your opportunities for job is high

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city

is many

kind

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kinds

of mall

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grocerys

a marketplace where groceries are sold

groceries

grocery's

grocery

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law companies which need people any kind of education.And if you want to study there is a lot of

place

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places

to choose and continue personal growing.

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reason

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the reason

why youth

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always tries

to live in

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the city

a city

cities

. For the other hands living in the

countryside

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the best idea

because of nature and calm.

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person love plants and

rest

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the rest

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they should live there.

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countryside

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the countryside

you can have garden

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flowers

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place for

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a hammock

the hammock

you

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You

can eat fresh

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locally grown food

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also

you can grow your own food and raise animals.

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example Bethoven

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always left the

city

to find a peace and live in the

countryside

. To summarize

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better for me is living in the

countryside

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because of I love nature and I prefer to be a healthy

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for

this

reason I prefer to live there

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countryside

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the countryside

is less pollution

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less bad food and more time to feel every

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Fri Apr 17 2020

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2Word repetition
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212 words

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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infrastructure
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