It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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choices
choose
live in
city
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the city
cities
or
countryside
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some people have arguments why
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are
finer to live in
city
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the city
a city
cities
but some prefer
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the countryside
.
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we know both of them has their advantages and disadvantages.
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It
is very interesting why people choose each place to live.
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want to talk about
city
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the city
cities
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consists
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kinds
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city
in general.
town
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The town
Town
has many superiority
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your opportunities for job is high
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in
city
is many
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kinds
of mall
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,
grocerys
a marketplace where groceries are sold
groceries
grocery's
grocery
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law companies which need people any kind of education.And if you want to study there is a lot of
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places
to choose and continue personal growing.
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This
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the reason
why youth
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always tries
to live in
city
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the city
a city
cities
. For the other hands living in the
countryside
is
best idea
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the best idea
because of nature and calm.
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If
person love plants and
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the rest
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they should live there.
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In
countryside
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the countryside
you can have garden
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flowers
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place for
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a hammock
the hammock
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you
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You
can eat fresh
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locally grown food
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also
you can grow your own food and raise animals.
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always left the
city
to find a peace and live in the
countryside
. To summarize
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better for me is living in the
countryside
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because of I love nature and I prefer to be a healthy
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for
this
reason I prefer to live there
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,
in
countryside
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the countryside
is less pollution
,
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less bad food and more time to feel every
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metropolitan
  • infrastructure
  • cosmopolitan
  • commute
  • sociocultural
  • prosperity
  • sustainability
  • rural
  • tranquility
  • urbanization
  • relocation
  • residential
  • populace
  • ecological footprint
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