It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?

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the best

way to solve problems. In my

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a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

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for help eldest people

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good form them. There are some reasons why I think that.

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one is getting help from older who is older

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conjunction used in comparatives

than

you is

valuable thing

Suggestion

a valuable thing

. Because

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advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)

older

people have more life experiments, that means they already know how to live, and how to solve the problems. As they live many years is means they have abundant experience.

Second

one is they give you

right suggestions

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the right suggestions

that your problems. To sum up getting help from eldest people than young people is better for who is searching right advice.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

112 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

wisdom
experience
modern challenges
peer advice
long-term perspective
contextual relevance
diverse perspectives
generational gap
mentorship
cautionary tale
evolving societal norms

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It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain about. In the letter: – Describe the problem and why you are unhappy – Arrange for an engineer to visit your home – Request a reduction in your bill

some believe that government should ban dangerous sports while other argue that there should be freed to do any sports or activity

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Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?