It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?

Taking encouragement from elder people is
best
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the best
way to solve problems. In my
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a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
opening
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for help eldest people
instead
of young one
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are
good form them. There are some reasons why I think that.
First
one is getting help from older who is older
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
you is
valuable thing
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a valuable thing
. Because
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
people have more life experiments, that means they already know how to live, and how to solve the problems. As they live many years is means they have abundant experience.
Second
one is they give you
right suggestions
Suggestion
the right suggestions
that your problems. To sum up getting help from eldest people than young people is better for who is searching right advice.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wisdom
  • experience
  • modern challenges
  • peer advice
  • long-term perspective
  • contextual relevance
  • diverse perspectives
  • generational gap
  • mentorship
  • cautionary tale
  • evolving societal norms
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