The graph shows demographical data corresponding to the quantity of immigrants to the United States between the years 1992 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given line chart depicts the changes in demographic quantities of
immigrants
over 16 years in United
States.
As can be seen in the graph Correct article usage
the United
initially
, 30,000 people immigrated in the assylums
, 27,000 having Correct your spelling
asylums
work
perimts
and the lowest counts for spouses, a little less than 20,000 in '90. A peak rise to 60,000 was evident in '92 for asylums but at the same Correct your spelling
permits
time
no significant change could be noticed in Add a comma
,time
immiggrants
having Correct your spelling
immigrants
work
permits or spouse visa
. With a major decline, the number Fix the agreement mistake
visas
for
asylum Change preposition
of
immigrants
again came in the range slightly higher than 40,000 and Correct your spelling
remained
remainned
constant till ;93, Correct your spelling
remained
Correct your spelling
immigrants
immmigrants
having spouse Correct your spelling
immigrants
visa
touched the line of 20,000 and Fix the agreement mistake
visas
coincided
with Wrong verb form
coinciding
number
same of Correct article usage
the number
work
permits
Furthermore
, a significant rise can be seen after the
'99 Correct article usage
apply
where
the Correct word choice
when
immigrants
for asylum reached Correct quantifier usage
number of immigrants
all
Add a hyphen
all-time
time
high of 160000, 120000 as in the case of work
permits but spouses remained low to a level of 25000 in '02. the number of work
permit immigrants
kept inclining and reached 140000 at the same time
count in asylums drastically dropped to 22000 and spouses attained peak
of 42000 in '08
Concluding, the dominant position had been Add an article
the peak
a peak
took
by Change the verb form
taking
taken
immigrants
for assylum
but Correct your spelling
asylum
large scale
fluctuations can be seen. spouse Add a hyphen
large-scale
immigrants
are recorded as all
Add a hyphen
all-time
time
low but are rising effective rise can be seen in work
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Vocabulary: Replace the words immigrants, work, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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