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To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of genetically engineered foods. However, some people believe that GM foods are not only unhealthy but affect the nature too. Do you agree or disagree about this?

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some
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Some
 people think that governments should take advantage of genetically engineered foods to ensure the quality of
live
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life
 for every
citizens
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citizen
 from the famine due to the ever-increasing habitants at the moment
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I
 will challenge
this
 school of thought
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One
 might argue that in
such
 criteria to date
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 the lack of
food
 is more and more ubiquitous
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hence
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 Governs should use the
nutrion
(physiology) the organic process of nourishing or being nourished; the processes by which an organism assimilates food and uses it for growth and maintenance
nutrition
neutron
nutrient
 from
genetical
by genetic mechanisms
genetically
 engineer plants
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 It is predicated on the assumption that
food
 is one of the essential elements in any live animal
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 so it would be indeed a
catastrophy
an event resulting in great loss and misfortune
catastrophe
catastrophic
 if we experienced the famine crisis like our
ancesters
someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)
ancestors
.
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Such
 action will prevent the risk of
food
 shortage.
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 reasoning
is not sound
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doesn't sound
does not sound
 as
cosuming
very intense
consuming
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product
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products
 make human being's
heath
the locus of feelings and intuitions
heart
 more susceptible to illness than ever
.
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This
 is because these items could cause some serious problem in our body
such
 as
imparing
make worse or less effective
impairing
importing
imparting
 our immune
systerm
instrumentality that combines interrelated interacting artifacts designed to work as a coherent entity
system
systems
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 leading some cancers or even mutation in our
gens
(genetics) a segment of DNA that is involved in producing a polypeptide chain; it can include regions preceding and following the coding DNA as well as introns between the exons; it is considered a unit of heredity
genes
guns
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further
 credence to my assertion
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untilizing
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
utilizing
food
 from
such
 method would have some detrimental effects on both nature and
ecosysterm
a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
ecosystems
 in the long run
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With regard to the former
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 GM measure will prevent plants from harmful insects, herbs or even make them more robust to ailments
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This
 leads the vital
food
 sources
disapperance
the act of leaving secretly or without explanation
disappearance
disappearances
 and make some birds confront the insects shortage and die out
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an ecosystem
ecosystem
the ecosystem
ecosystems
 is concerned
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 due to stronger abilities to kill dangerous
oppents
a contestant that you are matched against
opponents
 of
these plant
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these plants
,
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 making other insects of some natural vegetable grow overwhelmingly
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This
 result in
inbalanced
being or thrown out of equilibrium
unbalanced
imbalanced
esosystem
a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
 of earth
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In
 conclusion, for the reasons outlined above, it stands to reason that making use of products from genetic method is not appropriate for both
hunman
characteristic of humanity
human
humans
 and
environment
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environmental
.
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