To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of genetically engineered foods. However, some people believe that GM foods are not only unhealthy but affect the nature too. Do you agree or disagree about this?

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people think that governments should take advantage of genetically engineered foods to ensure the quality of
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life
for every
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citizen
from the famine due to the ever-increasing habitants at the moment
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the lack of
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is more and more ubiquitous
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Governs should use the
nutrion
(physiology) the organic process of nourishing or being nourished; the processes by which an organism assimilates food and uses it for growth and maintenance
nutrition
neutron
nutrient
from
genetical
by genetic mechanisms
genetically
engineer plants
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It is predicated on the assumption that
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is one of the essential elements in any live animal
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so it would be indeed a
catastrophy
an event resulting in great loss and misfortune
catastrophe
catastrophic
if we experienced the famine crisis like our
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someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)
ancestors
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action will prevent the risk of
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reasoning
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doesn't sound
does not sound
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very intense
consuming
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products
make human being's
heath
the locus of feelings and intuitions
heart
more susceptible to illness than ever
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is because these items could cause some serious problem in our body
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make worse or less effective
impairing
importing
imparting
our immune
systerm
instrumentality that combines interrelated interacting artifacts designed to work as a coherent entity
system
systems
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leading some cancers or even mutation in our
gens
(genetics) a segment of DNA that is involved in producing a polypeptide chain; it can include regions preceding and following the coding DNA as well as introns between the exons; it is considered a unit of heredity
genes
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untilizing
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
utilizing
food
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from
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method would have some detrimental effects on both nature and
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a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
ecosystems
in the long run
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With regard to the former
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GM measure will prevent plants from harmful insects, herbs or even make them more robust to ailments
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leads the vital
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sources
disapperance
the act of leaving secretly or without explanation
disappearance
disappearances
and make some birds confront the insects shortage and die out
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an ecosystem
ecosystem
the ecosystem
ecosystems
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due to stronger abilities to kill dangerous
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a contestant that you are matched against
opponents
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these plants
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making other insects of some natural vegetable grow overwhelmingly
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result in
inbalanced
being or thrown out of equilibrium
unbalanced
imbalanced
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a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
of earth
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conclusion, for the reasons outlined above, it stands to reason that making use of products from genetic method is not appropriate for both
hunman
characteristic of humanity
human
humans
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environmental
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