Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why is it happening?What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced.

Producing
trash
nowadays has become a basic problem which is faced by all over the world. In my point of view the
house hold
a social unit living together
household
sector
is producing much more
trash
. One of the
example
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examples
which can be taken from household
sector
is that the edible items which are not eaten by the people are
also
thrown in
trash
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the trash
.
the
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The
other factor which helps in producing a large amount of garbage is wastage of paper which is used as a resource material in schools. The industrial
sector
is
also
not far behind in producing
trash which
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trash, which
goes widely in sea water
thus
killing the marine life.Civilians, all
alone cannot
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alone, cannot
control or regulate the reduction of
trash
on its own. They may keep their
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
clean but
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clean, but
a major step has to be taken by a
government
as well.
First
of all
government
has to take a step against the schools which are wasting the resources after every six months by making bulletin boards. Through
this
huge amount of paper which is being discarded and thrown as a
trash
will be saved.
Secondly
,
government
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the government
also
has to take steps towards the industrial
sector
by compelling and restricting them not to throw the
trash
in
water which
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the water, which
the water which
is brutally damaging our marine life
also
causing the environmental pollution. In
this
way
government
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the government
can play its major role in
garbage’s reduction
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the garbage’s reduction
.
while
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While
summing up
,
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,
I would like to add that
this
world is a gift of God and to lead a happy and cheerful life we need to make our environment safe
,
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,
clean and healthy which is in our own hands.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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