Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why is it happening?What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced.

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Producing

trash

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nowadays has become a basic problem which is faced by all over the world. In my point of view the

house hold

a social unit living together

household

sector

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is producing much more

trash

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. One of the

example

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examples

which can be taken from household

sector

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is that the edible items which are not eaten by the people are

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thrown in

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trash

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the trash

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The

other factor which helps in producing a large amount of garbage is wastage of paper which is used as a resource material in schools. The industrial

sector

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not far behind in producing

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trash which

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trash, which

goes widely in sea water

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killing the marine life.Civilians, all

alone cannot

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alone, cannot

control or regulate the reduction of

trash

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on its own. They may keep their

surrounding

the environmental condition

surroundings

clean but

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clean, but

a major step has to be taken by a

government

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as well.

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of all

government

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has to take a step against the schools which are wasting the resources after every six months by making bulletin boards. Through

this

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huge amount of paper which is being discarded and thrown as a

trash

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will be saved.

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government

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the government

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has to take steps towards the industrial

sector

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by compelling and restricting them not to throw the

trash

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water which

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the water, which

the water which

is brutally damaging our marine life

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causing the environmental pollution. In

this

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way

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government

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the government

can play its major role in

garbage’s reduction

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the garbage’s reduction

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While

summing up

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I would like to add that

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world is a gift of God and to lead a happy and cheerful life we need to make our environment safe

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clean and healthy which is in our own hands.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

267 words

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