The increased world demand for oil and gas has made it necessary to look for these sources in remote and untouched natural places.  Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging these natural areas?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
It is suggested that new oil and gas resources be found in uninhabited areas. I am of the opinion that
this
is likely to create more drawbacks rather than benefits.      Admittedly, there are some merits, one of which is to supply the growing
energy
needs. As more and more technologies are being used in the modern world, facilitating them with
energy
has become an issue.
However
, oil and gas resources can be a good solution to mitigate it. Another positive outcome would be its price and efficiency.
Although
there are other
energy
sources, including solar power, wind and water generators, it is not cost-effective to make use of them.
Besides
, there is a likelihood that these power stations will be unable to meet the demand. In some regions,
for instance
, only solar panels can be used.      Despite the advantages mentioned above, I see some flaws in
this
suggestion in terms of
environment
Add an article
the environment
show examples
. First and foremost, the usage of conventional
energy
powers triggers air pollution
as a result
of exhausts released from vehicles,
for example
.
Furthermore
, finding unused mines is likely to entail cutting down trees in the area. Not only does
this
exacerbate global warming through deforestation problems, but
also
it will have detrimental impacts on biodiversity in terms of both fauna and flora
as a consequence
of habitat loss.      In conclusion, even though searching
and
Change preposition
for and
show examples
utilizing unused reserves of oil
as well as
gas
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
some positive influences, it plays a huge role in natural problems
such
as air pollution and the extinction of some species.
Submitted by Writing9 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

example advice
Ensure that examples provided in support of your arguments are specific and detailed.
task response advice
Try to deep dive into your main points to cover multiple angles related to the task.
task response highlight
The essay effectively addresses advantages and disadvantages, maintaining a good balance.
structure highlight
There is a clear structure with introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion present.
support highlight
Main points are generally well-supported with relevant information.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: