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the charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US

the charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US
#show #information #honey-bee #colonies #honey #production
The charts give information about the total
number
 of
honey
-bee
colonies
 and
honey
production
at
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US
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the US
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 between 1970 and 2010. In 1970, there were 4 million
honey
-bee
colonies
 and approximately 130,000 tonnes
honey
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of honey
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production
.
However
, the
number
 of
honey
-bee
colonies
 rose
almost
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 4.5 million in 1980
whereas
honey
production
 fell to 110,000 in 1980. From 1980
honey
-bee
colonies
 decreased after every 10 years till 2010,
in
addition
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 the
number
 of
colonies
 decline to 3.5
millions
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million
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 in 1990 and again fell
almost
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 2.5
millions
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million
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 in 2000.
Furthermore
, the final result was roughly 1.5 million
honey
-bee
colonies
 in 2010.
On the other hand
,
honey
production
 showed variation at
the
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 certain time. The amount of
honey
production
 fell to 110,000 tonnes in 1980 and
then
 went up to 120,000 tonnes in 1980.
Overall
, it is obvious that both
honey
-bee
colonies
 and
honey
production
were
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dropped in the period given, but the
number
 of
honey
-bee
colonies
 did not affect to amount of
honey
production
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, honey-bee, colonies, honey, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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