1. Write a letter of request for funding from faculty

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letter on behalf of

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Youth Council to respectfully requesting your faculty’s funding consideration of $2000 for our

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entitled Wonderland. Your support will allow us to implement the

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fostering a sense of wonder for the receiver and bolstering the faculty’s image. Our

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aspiration is to help a nine years old girl whose name is Hoang Thi Hien with cancer in Lai Chau, Vietnam. She is currently in hospital in need of surgery; h0wever, owing to the indigence of her family, her surgery may never happen.

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, if her health recuperates, her ambition of going to school for knowledge acquisition and socialization will be fulfilled.

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, it would be extremely worthwhile if our

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is approved. With the assistance of your faculty, she can definitely undergo the surgery.

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, not only will her

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be revitalized but

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, she can commence going to school.

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, the remained funding after her operation will partially alleviate her family condition. In terms of your faculty, your benevolence will accumulate attention from people as well as journalists.

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will be an ideal opportunity to advertise your faculty image among students. I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I look forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible and I would like to thank you for your time and consideration in

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matter. Yours sincerely, Phuong Minh Quang

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1. Write a letter of request for funding from faculty

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it's bad for them. Why is this? What is an effective way to improve people's healthy eating habits?