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In recent years foreign visitors should be charged more than local. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#years #visitors
Nowadays some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit culture and
tourist
 attractions in
country
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the country
countries
. I oppose the view and my reasons explained in the following
paraghraphs
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraphs
paragraph
. On the one hand charged for attractions increase dramatically for tourists. Though it is true that they are differences between locals and tourists
in
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from
 countries. But some countries less charged for
tourist
 than locals and
also
 it helps to attract more tourists. Other people believe that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals for developing attractions and others.
Furthermore foreign
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Furthermore, foreign
tourist
 charged more in all places
such
 as
hotels banks and
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hotels, banks and
 others because
tourism
 help for
countyrs
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
controls
 industry. I strongly disagree with the idea that because tourists should be charged similar with locals in some countries.
On the other hand
tourism
 is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue
to
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for
 many
countries but
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countries, but
 its disadvantages should not be overlooked.
Consequently prices
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Consequently, prices
 increasing significantly for foreign tourists in
culture
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cultural
 and
tourist
 attractions for
this
 reason
tourism
 undeveloped. As an effect for
tourism
 industry and culture. In a word, I think the idea can be very
unuseful
 for developing
countries but
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countries, but
 for us it might be different than tourists. It goes without saying that sometimes language help for
tourist
 because
theay
people in general
they
their
 are
communicate
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communicating
 in
native language
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the native language
 with locals and similar charged with locals. Some people believe that if
tourist
 and locals should be charged
similar
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similarly
 it useful
for
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to
 attract tourists in all countries because
this
 way increased in the world
.
Accept space
.
Overall I
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Overall, I
 strongly agree with the idea that tourists should be charged more than locals in all places. In
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • price discrimination
  • subsidize
  • footfall
  • conservation efforts
  • sustainable tourism
  • cultural exchange
  • economic impact
  • financial burden
  • local economy
  • infrastructure
  • perception of value
  • tiered services
  • mandatory
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