Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

Climate change is happening at an alarming rate, which lead to an argument that does it is
relate
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related
to the discipline authority promulgated for inhabitants.
Do
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Does
the rule need to change? After numerous accidents occurred to
planet
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a planet
the planet
, I strongly agree that laws should have the consider variation. In
this
essay, I will explain and give my opinion about
this
hot debate.
Initially
, the growth of population
are leading
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is leading
to over hunting. Individuals demand
are depend
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is depending
depends
so much on
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
consumption. Naturally, some lawbreakers willing to hunt animals event that animals are on the verge of extinction. To satisfied people temporary interested dogs
also
become a part of meal in some several
country
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countries
despite the moral aspect.
Moreover
, some unethical person would pay numerous money to have
rhino's
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rhino
horns for
decoration though
Accept comma addition
decoration, though
one
horn can harm
one
rhino
badly. If
one
hundred people want to have
rhino's horn
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a rhino's horn
,
one
hundred
rhino
will be kill meaningless. In consequent, rhinoceros population will be
blow
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blown
out significant while
also
running
animals
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animal
food chain.
In addition
,
enviroment
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environmental
environment
change
affect
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affects
people life
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a person's life
person's life
the person's life
peoples' life
immediately. We
can not
can not
cannot
live in a friendly world while the diversity of
animals reducing
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animals, reducing
,
plant
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the plant
is illness
also
cause dangerous for human health.
anything
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Anything
we eat have the chance to hurt
our
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
strength either occurs rare disease. All of
this
happen
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happens
has happened
because of human responsibility as well as government
has not punish
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has not punished
them strictly. Everything they do claim their benefits
first
and has not put them into
trouble so
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trouble, so
they continue
break
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breaking
the rule without hesitate. In conclusion, authorities should seriously warn
citizen what
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citizen, what
they
will lost
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will lose
if natural disease exist. Regulation made to be more considerable to protect
eco-system
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eco - systems
the eco - system
from unworthy events.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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