Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Actually, whenever there is a new
product
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, advertisement is necessary. It can be in the form of
Phamphlets
a small book usually having a paper cover
pamphlets
, posters, banners, Boards, in the NEWS papers, TV, ads painted on the vehicles, No Parking boards, on
whatsapp
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,
facebook
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Facebook
,
instagram
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, quicker etc.
Firstly
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, whenever we
to start
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start
a new
product
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or
new business
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a new business
, we have to make public know about it.
For example
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, when businessman opening a new mini market or
super market
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarket
, they generally, on the
first
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day of the opening,
gives
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give
tremondous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
tremendous
discounts. When there are advertisements in regular intervals of some
product
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or business, people will get tempted purchase that, even though they do not need it. The other side of the coin is, without advertisements, we will not come to know
features
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the features
and benefits of that particular
product
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.
For instance
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, my sons, when they were in
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
third
early childhood, when they have watched
spiderman movie
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the Spiderman movie
Spiderman movie
a Spiderman movie
, they forced me to buy
spiderman
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Spiderman
dresses for them and I had to purchase.
Finally
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, to conclude, it is us, who should decide what to buy and when to buy, by looking at our own
finance
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financially
, rather than going on with the advertisements.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
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