Government should put taxes on unhealthy food so that people eat healthy foods more. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nutritious
food
is getting disappear in
today
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today's
circumstances.People settle on fast-
food
items rather nutrition stuffs.In a firmly
environment public
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environment, public
expect
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expects
quantity not
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quantity, not
the quality of the
food
items.The problem starts from both the manufacturer as well as the seller of the
foods
benefit
goods
.The reason was explained as follows, Now a days
,
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,
Food
adulteration starts from the manufacturing company.Some corporate companies are focusing on the business profit point of view rather the
people
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peoples'
person's
peoples
health in wit
,
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,
that makes the earlier stage in
adulteration
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the adulteration
of
food
.
the
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The
next
step is that
,
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The people are expecting the
food
at
affordable price
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an affordable price
affordable prices
that's creating the opportunities to the seller to produce the
food
contains low nutritional
food
. People intakes supplements for the development of the body
instead
concentrating nutritious
food
.If the government puts taxes on the unhealthy
food
that doesn't
means
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mean
that the people will produce proper edibles. The advantages
is
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are
the number of buying non-
nutrition
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nutritious
nutritional
food
will reduce.
For instance
,
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,
looking for hotels will get
reduce
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reduced
as well as people
starts
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start
doing things at home. The dis-advantage is
,
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,
Its
upto
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up to
the
people
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person's
peoples
attitude towards nutrients and non
nutrients
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nutrient
food
.
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.
Due to increasing
population it's
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population, it's
quite difficult to control
such
act
for
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of
imposing taxes on non healthy foods. By concluding
,
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,
it's not the tax
issue imposing
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issue, imposing
on the
food
rather people should focus on the healthy foods.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deterrent
  • adoption
  • reinvested
  • subsidies
  • disproportionately
  • calorie-dense
  • non-communicable diseases
  • financial strain
  • guidelines
  • constitutes
  • confusion
  • bias
  • exemptions
  • mitigate
  • undue
  • financial hardship
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