Some people say that in all levels of education, from the primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practiacal skills. Do you agree or disagree?
Everyone makes mistakes. The
first
thing we need to acknowledge is that people can not be totally rational since the objective cause of information asymmetry and the subjective cause of social and psychological factors. Linking Words
For example
, in human resource management, manager may have a bias impression on their employees due to the Linking Words
first
impression, halo effect, stereotype, project effect, and immediate cause effect. Based on these effects, we may understand why the Jewish identity of Dreyfus can bring bias impression on others.
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I’d like to use the word “narcissism” to explain why people think they are right even if they’re wrong. Narcissism can be explained by extremely high Linking Words
self-esteem
or by extremely low Use synonyms
self-esteem
that people are trying to mask. High Use synonyms
self-esteem
often goes with overconfidence and status-conscious, Use synonyms
this
kind of people have a strong belief of their judgements and may easily feel offended when others have different opinions. Compared with maintaining their authority, the truth doesn't matter. Linking Words
This
is the reason why they refuse to release Dreyfus from prison. Linking Words
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, in our daily life, we should Linking Words
also
be aware of people with low Linking Words
self-esteem
. For Use synonyms
this
kind of people, they are sensitive to other people's comments and view neutral comments as criticism, Linking Words
thus
ascribe the error to society rather than themselves.
To sum up, if we really want to improve our judgment, the Linking Words
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thing we need is the knowledge about how to improve our rational thinking. Linking Words
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, we should avoid being narcissistic, we need to feel proud Linking Words
instead
of ashamed when we notice we might have been wrong about something.Linking Words
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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