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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THE BEST WAY TO REDUCE CRIME IS TO GIVE LONGER PRISON SENTENCES. OTHERS, HOWEVER, BELIEVE THERE ARE BETTER ALTERNATIVE WAYS OF REDUCING CRIME. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

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Crime
 is a serious and growing problem in most societies.
Although
 many people believe that the best way to tackle/curb
this
 is to place people in
prison
 for longer periods, others believe other measures will be more effective. There are benefits of giving offenders longer
prison
 sentences.
Firstly
, spending a long time in
prison
 provides an opportunity for the
prison
 services to rehabilitate a prisoner.
For example
, someone who has committed a serious offence
such
 as assault will need a long time in
prison
 to be sure they can be re-educated not to re-offend.
In addition
 to
this
, longer
prison
 sentences will act as a deterrent for someone who is thinking of committing a
crime
.
Moreover
 Many jails provides vocational training that
help
Suggestion
helps
 them to get jobs when the comes out from their jail period.
However
, some people argue that leaving people in
prison
 for a long time means that they will mix with other criminals and so their character will not improve. One alternative is community service.
This
 gives an offender the opportunity to give something positive back to society, and so it may improve their character.
Also
, the government could focus its resources on the causes of
crime
, which would lead to less
crime
 in the future. In my opinion, it is important to look at alternative methods. Many countries have lengthy
prison
 sentences, but
crime
 has continued to increase throughout the world, so it is clear that
this
 is not completely effective. That said, long
prison
 sentences should remain for those who commit serious crimes
such
 as assault or murder, as justice for the victim and their family should take priority.

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