Many parents encourage young people to leave home early when they become older,while others think they should stay at home with the family.discuss both views and give your opinions
Nowadays young people are motivated to leave their family early when they reach to a certain
maturity whereas
others object Accept comma addition
maturity, whereas
this
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that living with the own family is a better option. Accept comma addition
notion, saying
Although
, separating from the family flourishes independancy
and freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
Personel
freedom, my personal perspective is that concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality
personal
young
individuals are benefited by granting the proper guidance to build up their lives when they stay with parents.
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younger
To begin
with, people become more independent when they commence an own life
separately
. In fact, they have their personal freedom to take Suggestion
separate
life
decisions and learn to survive alone through confronting challenges by themselves. For an example, recent survey
done in the UK has highlighted that young individuals who live independently have better Suggestion
a recent survey
life
skills and strength to face challenges than ones
who hinge on their families. Suggestion
the ones
However
, I disagree with this
because it is hard to develop life
without any assistance from the family.
On the other hand
, adolescents grant proper guidance and optimum protection in building up their life
when they stay with the family. Moreover
, people in youth are not only lacking adequate experience and maturity but
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maturity, but
also
irresponsible in taking decisions and there is a likelihood to go wrong. For an instance, the majority of teens who lives separately from their parents in Sri Lanka are victims of drug and alcohol addiction. Therefore
, leaving homes
early eliminates the support and security which are provided by parents to youngsters.
In conclusion, Suggestion
home
although
spending the life
away from the family encourages independence and personal freedom of youth, it removes the assistance and safety which are given by the family. Hence
, young people should be allowed to stay with the parents until they reach an adequate maturity to become responsible for their life
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