You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plan explain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Tricia, Hope you are doing well,

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your family! I have been admitted to Coast Mountain College, Terrace in Business and Administration diploma for two years. To support my tuition fees and get work experience, I want you to help me to get a part-time job. My classes will start on the 7th of September and I will land in Terrace on the 2nd of September. The accommodation has been already booked with the college, and I will be staying there for the next two years. They are

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providing a first-time pick-up facility from the airport for international students. As you know, I graduated in finance and want to start a business in my home country after getting the most out of

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course and international work experience. You have been in British Columbia for years, and your social network is very strong. I want you to assist me in getting a part-time job to support my studies and tuition fees. I will be very grateful to you for your help and emailed you my resume as well. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Take care and stay fine. Yours Truly Ashima

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coherence and cohesion

The structure of your letter is generally clear, but consider ensuring that each paragraph develops a single idea more explicitly.

task achievement

Your response is mostly complete, but you could provide more specific details about the type of job you are looking for and any specific assistance you need from your friend.

greeting and closing

Excellent greeting and closing, making it warm and friendly.

task achievement

You clearly stated your study plan and reason for wanting a part-time job.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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