Write a letter to your friend who just moved to a new house letting him know about a gift you prepared for him/her a) What was the gift b) Why you chose it c) How it will be delivered

Dear Priya, How are you? Hope
this
letter bring you good health. I’m glad that
finally
you have moved to your dream home and you will be excited
also
. To add to
this
happiness, I’ve prepared a beautiful present for you. I bought a photo frame which has your family picture. I personally requested the artist to draw the picture using the same materials used for Tanjore paintings. It came out well and along with that I’ve bought
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photo frame to hang it on the wall near to the staircase. I choose to buy
this
gift because I know that you are fond of paintings.
Moreover
, it will help to decorate your home and give
pleasant
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atmosphere.
Also
, it will be a memorable one because whenever you see those photos you will remember me. It will be delivered to you on Sunday. Since it has glass, I’m afraid if I sent it through courier whether it will reach you without any damage. So, I requested my uncle who is
traveling
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to your hometown will deliver the gift
at
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your home. Hope you will like my present. Look forward to seeing you soon. Best regards, Saru
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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