Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same product anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is said that countries are becoming to each other because of the global spread of the same product, which are now
avilabile
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
for purchase almost anywhere. I strongly believe that
this
modern development is highly detrimental culture and traditions worldwide. A
contry's
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country's
countries
countries'
history, language and ethos are all inextricably bound up in its manufactured artefacts. If the relentless advance of international brands into every corner of the world continues
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these bland packages might
oneday
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one day
completely oust the traditional
objectsof
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objects of
a nation, which would be a loss of richness and diversity in the world, as well as the
said
experiencing or showing sorrow or unhappiness
sad
disappearance of the manifestations of a place's character.
what
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What
would a Japanese tea company be without its specially
craftedteapot
or a Fijian Kava ritual without its bowl made from a certain type of tree bark? Let us not forget either that traditional products
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,
whether these be medicines, cosmetics, toys, clothes, utensils or food provide employment for local people.
the
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The
spread of manufactured products can often bring in its
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be awake, be alert, be there
wake
a loss of jobs,
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the syllable naming the fifth (dominant) note of any musical scale in solmization
so
people turn to buy the new brand perhaps thinking it more glamorous than the one they are used to.
This
eventually puts old-school craftspeople out of work.
Finally
, tourism numbers may
also
be affected
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as travellers become disillusioned with every place just the same as the ones they visited previously. To see the same products in shops the world over is boring, and does not impel visitors to
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cause to open or to become open
open
their wallets in the same way that trinkets or souvenirs unique to the particular area do. Some may argue that all people are entitled to have access to the same products, but I say that local objects suit local conditions best, and that faceless uniformity worldwide
is
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are
an unwelcome and dreary prospect.
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