Some people think that the amount of time we spend using the internet has a negative effect on social interaction, but other people feel that it opens up more possibilities for communication. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using the internet.

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Without a doubt, the
internet
has become one of the most important and transformative technologies in modern history. Not only is it an exceptional
communication
tool, but it is
also
cost effective for most people. While the
internet
has positively changed the way we communicate, it
also
has some damaging effects for individuals and society. Prior to the
internet
,
communication
was limited
to telephones
Accept comma addition
to, telephones
, letters, faxes, or
face
to
face
if you were in the same area.
This
was quite often costly due to exorbitant telephone charges, if calling abroad, and high postage fees and wait times for letters to arrive. The
internet
solved
Suggestion
has solved
those issues by allowing users to connect instantaneously with little to no cost. It has
also
opened the door for people, who do not always have
time
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the time
or the ability to physically meet one another, stay in contact via many of the social media applications on offer. As an expatriate living in Egypt it is hideously expensive to telephone friends and family in Australia. Not only is cost an issue, but the
time
difference is
also
a problem.
However
, with the advent of applications
such
as WhatsApp and Viber, I can leave my family messages at any
time
of the day, free of charge.
Thus
, ease of
communication
is possible due to the
internet
. Despite having many plus points, there is unfortunately a darker side to the
internet
. Due to the fact that
internet
access is easily accessible for most people,
this
connectivity is resulting in obsessive usage. It is a common occurrence in many homes these days that families sit in the same room for hours on end, never uttering a single word to each other. Why, because they are utterly obsessed with surfing the net, playing games or messaging friends online. We find that most people, myself included, find it nigh on impossible to put down our devices in case we ‘miss’ something.
This
addictive behaviour has started to result in a breakdown of social skills – we are in danger of losing our ability to effectively talk to one another
face
to
face
. To contemplate a world without the
internet
is something unimaginable. Society has gained a great deal since the
internet
’s inception, particularly in terms of ease of
communication
.
However
,
although
obsessive usage is problematic, people should control the
time
spent online;
thus
, minimising anti-social behaviour.

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