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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development ?

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Nowadays, some critical jobs in countries earn less and
this
 issue can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 on societies and people. Therefor
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
 and
proffesionals
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professionals
 who decide for the countries must think and codify some rules for solving
this
 problem. The chief reason why celebrities earn more money than politicians is most of people like and fallow
acters
a theatrical performer
actors
, actresses, and
singers but
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singers, but
least
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the least
 of them have information about famous
polititions
a leader engaged in civil administration
politicians
politician
.
it
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It
 can be
also
 argued that people
in
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on
avarage
approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value
average
 go cinemas and concerts 3 or 4 times in a year and most of the individuals do not have any experience to watch one political program in whole lives. Apart from these, another function is political issues are not
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
 subjects for children.
Politition
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Politicians
 who are manage the societies and individuals.
Therefore it
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Therefore, it
 is so prominent to earn enough money
inorder
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in order
 to take time and energy to think about
foundamental
serving as an essential component
fundamental
fundamentals
 and
nwssesary
absolutely essential
necessary
 needs of people. If they
are not satisfy
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are not satisfied
 with
job
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a job
 and income
,
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,
they do not feel responsible about
various problems
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the various problems
 of society.
As a
result we
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result, we
 do not have a good
economical
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economic
 condition.
Thus
 we
also
 do not have delighted people.
Furthermore regardless
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Furthermore, regardless
to
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of
 the income of
polititions
a leader engaged in civil administration
politicians
 have undeniable impacts on countries. To sum up,
politition
a leader engaged in civil administration
politicians
 and celebrities are both important for each
countries
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country
.
Therefore
, for having a better
societies
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society
,
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
 must regard to
importance
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the importance
 of each
jobs
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job
 and do balanced between
values
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the values
 of each jobs and impact of
then
objective case of they
them
 on
socities
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
societies
.

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