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A lot of old people are suffering from loneliness these days. They also lack physical fitness. What do you think are the reasons for this problem? Can you think of possible solutions?

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Past few decades have seen a dramatic change in
old
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an old age home
age
 home due to lack of communication and lack of closeness among family members. Old people nowadays are facing loneliness and
also
 they are weak as well as unfit. In
this
 following essay I aim to identify some causes of
this
problem
 and some viable solutions.
First
 of all, the significant reason of the
problem
 is the nuclear family. The trend of living in a nuclear family is increasing
day
 by
day
 moderately. People prefer independent life and cannot tolerate any kind of
boundation
 in their personal matter so they try to maintain distance along theirs grandparents and elder
one
.
Moreover
, Retirement is
also
 a reason, after getting its people loss their network of friends, they feel lonely and isolate. Somewhere they found themselves as a burden on family because that
time
 they unable to do any work and face financial
problem
.
Furthermore
, with passing
age they
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age, they
 not able to talk and listen to someone because of
age
 factor and their weak body. No
one
 available to look after them in their own family who can give them food on
time
.
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.
 They think freedom has been lost and become everything
this
 cause they suffer from stress and other physical issues. In order to solve
this
problem
, people should have to change their thoughts about nuclear family and they can choose to joint family as well as
time
 and attention should be given. They have to keep in mind and never forget that
one
day
 will be coming when they
also
 face with the same
time
 and
age
. Change matters a lot so we should change ourself
first
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first, then
then
 stop treating them as a burden and start treating them as a head and most significant member of the family. In gist, we all are responsible for that because we are adopting Western culture. If it goes on,
then
one
day
 we will
also
 find themselves in old
age
 home and suffer with the same
problem
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