The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As
health
is one of the most important areas of human's life there are many arguments about it. It has been claimed that in the future people are likely to have lower well-being standard. I completely agree with
this
statement as from my point of view, people's
health
will deteriorate due to the high levels of
stress
, sedentary life and junk food consumption.
To begin
with, with the introduction of technology, it brought not only benefits, but drawbacks.
First
, people started to spend a great amount of
time
in front of their computers since many tasks could be done by the usage of it. It results in the fact of forgetting to move from
time
to
time so
Accept comma addition
time, so
problems with
health
such
as digestion diseases or psychological disorders are
occurred
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occurring
.
For instance
, dwellers who have to travel big distances to get to the work and especially office workers possess a bigger chance to suffer from many
chronical
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chemicals
chemical
diseases in the future due to the
time
they spend in sitting position.
Secondly
, the
stress
people get every day
also
have a great impact on both their mental and physical
health
. Living in eternal stressful condition, people become more nervous, irritable and aggressive, the level of tension increases. The consequences are mental diseases which produce or exacerbate physical problems as an organism cannot deal with it greatly.
In addition
, researches show that people with a higher level of
stress
are likely to have obesity and woes with weight. It happens as in the condition of
stress
our organism has a desire to get dopamine, the reward to mitigate the mood, and in the role of
this
reward can be tasty food
such
as fast food, which
also
deteriorate
health
due to the high content of sugar, fats and flavour enhancers. To conclude,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree with
this
statement about people's lower
health
standard. There is a strong evidence of a connection between sedentary life and
stress
levels and decreasing
health
standard and statistics show that it will continue in the future.
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