Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behavior and protect them from danger. However, children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom. To what extend do you agree?

Children are the building blocks of the nation and how they should be raised is a matter of utmost prominence. Parents and teachers think that they have become
god
benefit
good
and start governing children’s life by imposing numerous rules and to justify they say that they are guarding them from
misshappening
so badly formed or out of shape as to be ugly
misshapen
miss happening
.
On the contrary
, it has rather detrimental effects on Mental and physical growth of children. Evidently, I see eye to eye with the central idea of
this
topic due to various reasons. The
first
reason is physical health. Supporters contemplate that if there are rules children will inculcate good behaviour,
otherwise
they will become
thief
Suggestion
a thief
thieves
and adapt ill habits
such
as drinking when grown up, which to some extent is true but,
Consequently
, they should not forget that excess of everything is bad.
For example
, my niece is being raised with vaster freedom very limited rules, she is active & holds
first
position in academics as well as choosing her extracurricular activities on her own.
This
brings to my
second
point, it is sometime said adolescents raised under strict rule are more likely to become disciplined & intelligent.
On the contrary
, it has been observed that restrictions make them submissive and
in addition
to it their brain remains under developed which in return limits their thinking pattern and can never think out of the box. Substantially, the research conducted by Indian Psychological institute reflects out of hundred fifty percent of children with more open environment were more creative than children with rules. To summarize, albeit I acknowledge rules are important for better understanding of right and wrong, without obstructing the growth of children. Parents and teachers should consider them as the bud of
rose
Suggestion
the rose
a rose
and should nourish the with love and care. Their role should be more of a facilitator than dictator.
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