Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person's nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the global problem is

crime

and it is a consequence of social issues and misery, others believe that

crime

is perpetrated by a bad behaviour person. I am going to discuss these views according to scientific and humanistic. There are various reasons why many people find

crime

is a result of public trouble as well as poor people than bad behaviour one.

Firstly

, some persons earn too less

money

and they must feed their family.As we know that in the world has families and people, who cannot work anywhere or live alone and have not got bread-winner.

As a result

of earning too little

money

, they have to do

crime

like thief, robbery or other one.

Secondly

, in the present, there are many problems with society

crime

. Since, today more people work a lot a day and they feel nervous and tired themselves. In many cases, they cannot concert with someone and unfortunately, they are killed or trounced that person.

Lastly

, modern younger like to do devilment and they committed crimes

such

as burglary, arson, deal drugs or joyriding. It is result of pet. In my view, people must study and learn a new skill for their future. Because, more of misdeeds are committed by illiterate people. There are not any jobs

also

cannot work and earn

money

to feed. Committing

crime

is the best way for them in order to making

money

. To sum up, committing

crime

is increasing day by day. The reasons are badly behaviour people and poverty, social problems too. ☆ Dilafruz ☆

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