write Problem/Solution paragraphs. You should link the problems with the solution. (200-250 words) 1) The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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Before no one knows that we can reach to our love ones without even go to them and knows every update in them
life
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, it’s incredible what the
internet
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can do
.
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And
also
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we can know what’s going in the world while we
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(photography) the act of assuming a certain position (as for a photograph or portrait)
sitting
in our bedroom
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with
a single click and like any other things in
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world the
internet
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has its upside down. We can
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reach
to
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for
with
our love once without meeting
them but
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them, but
it’s
also
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create
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creating
created
a problem that we don’t really know what is going on in our love
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one's
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from some pictures or messages because they’re going to let us see what they want us to see
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,
but when we meet them in the flesh it is a different, we can take a good look
on
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for
them and
them
of them or themselves
their
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. And it’s
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create
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created
a new
issues
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issue
that’s going to let us make a distends between us and our family at home
,
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,
because it takes a big time of our daily routine and we
spending
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spend
are spending
it all
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on
the
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so, we don’t know what is going on outside our room but we know
what’s
what thing
what
the news in the world. One solution to the problem of the
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to balance between our real
life
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and the
internet
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is by organizing our time when and where to use the
internet
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So
,
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,
to avoid
to be
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being
apart from our
family we
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family, we
have to practice to spend
sometimes
at some indefinite or unstated time
sometime
with them
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to
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of
spending it all in the
internet
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.
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If we trying to make our
life
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any easier we should not make the
internet
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our priority there are a lots of importing thing comes before it

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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