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Some cities have few controls over design and construction on housing and office building. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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In these days, the design
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 the building has aroused people’s discussion. While some areas have fewer controls on housing and office building, people have more freedom in decorating their spaces. My belief is that that the positive aspects of
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 trend of freedom in housing designs might certainly exert some detrimental to some specific historical values.
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, the uniformity of a city can be distorted.
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 means there are some places where building designs serve particular purposes,
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, to show the local area’s cultural and historical values. If people here are allowed to freely build houses that do not follow the established guidelines, the aesthetic values will be compromised.
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, contemporary buildings are not permitted to remain an example of a South-East Asian trading port dating from the 15th to the 19th century and has become a UNESCO World Heritage Site. There are,
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, some dazing advantages that can easily overshadow the disadvantages of
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 matter. The benefit is that it gives scope for creativity which allows designers or house owners to be more open to new ideas and to freely experiment with new materials and designs.
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, it may cause some boredom when all houses look alike. The diversity in house design,
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 as the combination of classical and state-of-the-art as well as unique constructions, enriches social life.
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, a building should not be considered mere contentment as well. In
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 circumstances, a loose regulation on the design and construction of the building is obviously beneficial. In conclusion,
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 trend of freedom in construction is not without demerits the upsides will justify these.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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