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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Learning a foreign
language
 will help to world tours or working in other countries is believed by few people.
Although
, few others feel that there are few others reasons to learn other
country
 languages.
This
 essay talk about both the point of views and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will give my opinion in the conclusion.
Firstly
,
this
 essay will discuss how a foreign
language
 is used for travelling or job purpose and
secondly
, the other reasons in the own countries through other languages. Nowadays, learning foreign
country
 languages is used to go after other countries or to work in. If students who are willing to work in other countries or going for
further
 studies they need to apply for a visa. So that, for these visa process countries may ask for foreign
language
 skills to survive in their
country
.
For example
, If a student who finished bachelors in his own
country
 and interested to purse master in an English speaking
country
, he need to take IELTS or PTE exams which test his English capability to move to that
country
.
In contrast
, few other people believe that learning other languages will
also
 help in other ways. Globalisation as been increasing in every
country
 for their own development. On the other side, every organisation wants to tie up with other counties for expanding their business. So, people who are working in own
country
 should learn foreign speaking languages to interact and communicate with them.
For instance
, an employee of a software company wants to discuss project details with the other employee of the same company in a different
country
, he need to know the basic
language
 to speak to him and understand. To conclude, studying foreign languages will not help to work or travel in different countries, but
also
 helps to survive in their own countries. I recommend that everyone should learn global languages from their schooling which helps the in future.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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