Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I tend to agree that the
government
should be handled to reducing environmental damage. Every year we transform the enormous
amount
of resources for buildings, car, plastics etc. Along with that, the enormous
amount
of species has become extinct. I think
this
global environmental problem must tackle an individual person because we are consumed and spender. We have to change habits for a better future.
For example
, people make it a habit to bring own shopping bag when go to shop, try to choose
second
hand products, try to not leave foods etc. In primary industries case, trying to not pick more than necessary cattle, crops and fishes.
Moreover
, you should regard when you go shopping whether the product is renewable.
However
, the global environment has enormous
amount
and complex problems, global warming, to waste foods and increasing
amount
of CO2 emission. Now, these problems are getting worse year after year.
Therefore
, they need help from
government
, to name a few, developing facilities of recycling station, advancing solar and wind power. Especially, solar and wind power make a lot of energy and they are obvious efficient resources. The
government
also need
Suggestion
also needs
to assist with individual company
that is
trying to solve about these problems. The global environmental problem is not only individual country's problem, it relates to all over the world. The
government
should support to these programs and sound an alarm bell to people. At the same time, we should change own habit to more simple way and try to avoid waste resources.
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