Some people claim that tourism can help to bridge cultural gaps between peoples of different nationalities and cultures. Do you agree or disagree?

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There has been always a debate on whether international travel can
resolving
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resolve
cultural differences between people or not.
Although
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I acknowledge that
tourism
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offers foreign and indigenous people cross-
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cultural
interactions, I believe it to be not really effective in bridging cultural gaps.
Firstly
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, cultural barriers cannot be completely removed within a vacation trip because of the shortage of time.
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, a trip often takes place
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from
2-3 weeks, and it is impossible for any people to have a deeper understanding about the host country in
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a short span of time. Even if they only scratch the surface of the cultures, they need to stay in a place for a couple of days, which rarely occurs as almost trippers want to pay visits to as many landscapes as possible.
Secondly
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, cultural identity
migh
expresses possibility
might
end up disappearing under the influence of tourists' demands. On
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a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
travel experiences, a lot of international tourists ask for services that are unrelated to indigenous culture. Sadly,
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, many locals have no hesitation to meet their
requirments
required activity
requirements
requirement
immediately and make a huge profit from these
sevices
performance of duties or provision of space and equipment helpful to others
services
.
As a result
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,
such
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actions make cultural identity fade away. In Sapa,
for example
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, there have been a number of European restaurants and cafes opened with the aim of satisfying travellers's tastes.
Likewise
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, one of the most popular jobs here is working as a porter and carrying bags for tourists as traditional crafts like doing
handicarfts
a work produced by hand labor
handicrafts
handcrafts
are less profitable. Gradually, in view of tourists' needs,
cutural
power to direct or determine
control
actuarial
jobs and cultural identity will be superseded by non-indigenous ones. Another point to be considered is
tourism
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might cause damage to tangible
culltural
of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors
cultural
heritages
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tourist attractions. Let me adduce a proof, in
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the Temple
of Literature in Ha Noi, tourists used to rub stone
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turtles'
turtle
heads in the hope of sticking lucky, as a consequence, the stone heads are wearing away.
This
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example, along with other problems
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as littering, is typical for bad physical impacts of
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on cultural heritages. To sum up, I think that
tourism
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is not
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used as an intensifier
very
productive in bridging up
cutural
of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors
cultural
gaps due to the shortage of times and some ill-effects it has on things of cultures.Some people claim that
tourism
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can help to bridge cultural gaps between peoples of different
nationalities
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Nationalities
and cultures. Do you agree or disagree? .......................................................................................................................................................................

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