Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

For some individuals, the loss of a certain
species
of plants and animals was the main environmental
problem
in our time. But for others, there are more essential environmental problems that
needs
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need
to be resolved than the lather. Based on what I know, the loss of plant and animal
species
has been one of the
first
environmental
problem
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problems
that we have faced.
For instance
, the wild animals in the forest that has been extinct because of illegal hunting of animals. Some of them are used for businesses while others
are served
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serve
as a main dish in some fancy restaurants. Like in China, They are used to eating bats. They try to hunt and catch some bats from the caves not knowing that many
species
of bats are getting extinct. Many
species
of
t
the thing named or in question
it
it it
. The decision on what to
resolved
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resolve
first
should be based
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located at or attached to
on
in
the place and
people animals
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people, animals
and plants
has been
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have been
extinct due to lack of knowledge about taking care of our environment, most specially the animals and plants. As a lover of nature, there are so many environmental issues that
needs
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need
to be seen. Like pollution of air, which has been one of the environmental issues that many of us has to
faced
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face
in our daily lives. One good example of
this
Is the smoke that was emitted by vehicles. Specially in the Philippines, because of the large population of cars, the smoke that these vehicles are too much which causes the air polluted and causes harmful effects to the health of the people. In my opinion, All environmental issues are important. Every country has different kind of environment, so the decision on what should be the main
problem
should be based on the people living in a certain country or region. As for the things that have been said, All environmental issues are essential. No issues are more important than the others. No matter how big or small the
problem
is, we should face and resolved with the best solution.
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  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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