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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a school career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your option.

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Nowadays, it is argued which one is the right way to succeed, getting a
job
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 after the school or continuing the studies at a
university
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 or a college. I believe, that studying at a
university
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 is the best choice to have a successful career.
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, starting a
job
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 after the end of school may be beneficial in a several ways.
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 of all, by acting in
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 a way young people have the chance to be independent and earning their own money.
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, they can develop their skills within a workplace. Since, most of the employers are seeking for experienced employees, starting a
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 at
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 an early age is a good idea.
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, my best friend decided to get a
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 when he finished his school as a waiter and now he has been promoted as a supervisor.
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 will be a clear advantage to get experience for better positions in the future.
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, studying at the
university
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 is very important not only for individuals but for the whole community. Without studying several of the jobs would die and definitely it's a negative impact in our society.
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, it is impossible to work a doctor or a lawyer without having a relevant degree.
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, people who have a
university
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 or a college degree, they are usually paid off for their efforts. Jobs that require a
university
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 degree usually provide high incomes to individuals.
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, lawyers and doctors are considered to be the highest paid jobs.
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, educated people may have a successful career. To conclude, there are advantages in both sides. Since, universities and colleges are the wisest investment in the future productivity of our society, I think studying in colleges or universities is essential.

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