There are severe social consequences to housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Dear Mr.Martin, I am writing

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letter to complain about the accommodation that you have provided me in the month of September. Basically, there were several issues in the room.

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and, predominantly, the bed bugs in the bedroom.

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, I thought of its some other insects which is part of my luggage after keen observation only I concluded that as bed bugs. With those bucks I am unable sleep properly every night, for me it's like a nightmare.

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, the tenant agreement stated that, there were advanced beds with extra comforts along with nice pillows per person and weekly washing will provide. But

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is far way for implementation only for writing purposes. It would be great if you are able to solve the bed bu

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accommodation. Alternatively, you can replace those beds and request for deep cleaning so that we can avoid bu

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roblems for certain levels. Thank you for your time and hoping that the problem will be solved soon. Yours sincerely Meera Shareef

Sun Apr 26 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 4.5

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There are severe social consequences to housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

“Some people think that Government should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion”

Nowadays,many people choose to be self-employed,rather than to work for a company or organisation.why might this be the case?what could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.

Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some peoplesay this is good but other believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or a negative development?