In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One question that has caused a great deal of controversy over the years is whether the
government
should impose higher taxes on fast
food
since there is a growing number of citizens enduring
health
repercussions from the excessive consumption of fast
food
. In my opinion,
although
it is essential for the
government
to impose higher taxes on fast
food
, there are
also
alternative measures which the
government
could act. On the one hand, it is clear that imposing higher taxes on fast
food
is effective in preventing fatal
health
diseases.
Firstly
, since fast
food
could result in fatal
health
diseases that affect public
health
, the
government
has the responsibility to intervene in the fast
food
industry. In fact, the coronary heart diseases, which result from high sugar-based
food
, take as much as 500,000 individuals lives each year, which would mean a reduction in
productive workroce
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a productive workforce
productive workforce
for the nation's development.
Secondly
, by imposing higher taxes, many people, especially those who are under-privileged, may find fast
food
unaffordable
impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
and
thus
would refrain from
purcharsing
the act of buying
purchasing
fast
food
and start preparing meals at home
On the other hand
,
although
imposing higher taxes could be beneficial, there are
certainly
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certain
methods that are as effective in order to reduce
health
problems resulting from fast
food
.
Firstly
, the
government
should raise the public
awereness
having knowledge of
awareness
of how fast
food
could have detrimental effects on our body.
This
could be done by producing informative TV programs and incorporating courses on home-cooking in school curriculum to not only provide alternative healthy options but
also
teach children how to ensure a healthy diet. In that way, the
government
could still reduce the consumption of fast
food
while maintaining a sustainable
food
source for the under-privileged.
Secondly
, the
government
could enact laws that fast
food
manufacturers must involve healthy ingredients,
such
as vegetables,
into
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in
the process of producing fast
food
.
As a result
, a balanced diet is acquired and a healthy lifestyle is maintained by the citizens. In conclusion, the act of imposing higher taxes by the authorities could somewhat reduce the detrimental impact of fast
food
to the public
health
such
as
extering
put to use
exerting
a financial pressure on under-privileged
citiznes
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
.
However
, in my opinion, there are superior measures which the
government
could take
such
as raising
awereness
having knowledge of
awareness
or enacting strict laws on fast
food
.
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