All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affect both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Nations worldwide are dealing with the increasing issue of obesity which is a cause for concern for all age groups. There are two main causes, overconsumption of fast

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and lack of exercise. Possible solutions would be a

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tax on fast

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and special incentives for gym membership to get

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exercising

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. One of the reasons that

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are becoming overweight these days is that they are eating more junk

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, ready meals and convenience

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rather than cooking healthy meals at home.

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is because many

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tend to lead a busy life, so after a long day at

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, it is easier to just buy convenience

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or get a takeaway.

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, a 2015 Report by the UK

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found that sales of these types of

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have risen considerably in the past 20 years. To tackle

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issue the

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should take steps to increase tax on trans fats, high sugar or unhealthy

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.

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,

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would think twice about the

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they consume which could lead to them losing weight. Another problem that needs to be considered is a lack of exercise.

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of leading a hectic life with

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commitments, many

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are just too tired to go to the gym or join a sports club.

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, after

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, the vast majority of

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prefer to come home and sit in front of the TV.

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, when

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have time o􀃠 they tend to relax rather than go to a gym. One possible solution is for employers to consider the

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of their employees and

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offer

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as discounts to join sports or fitness clubs. If

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is implemented it would have a positive effect on

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health and a reduction in weight gain. In conclusion, being overweight is an increasing issue because of

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the consumption

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of fast

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,

convenience

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and convenience

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foods

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and not enough exercise

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work

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commitments. The

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needs to look at taxing fast

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and companies should set up incentives for gyms, sports or