You recently stayed at your friend's place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear Rahul, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am writing

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letter to inform you that, I was

listening

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listening to

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music on the

radio

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at your home and, accidentally, I broke the

radio

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by dropping it down on the floor. I was in

Kitchen

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the Kitchen

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and preparing dinner for myself. It was around 8 pm.

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preparing the dinner I took the

radio

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in my hand and tried to change the song.

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, my hands were oily.

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, the

radio

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was fallen down from my hands when I tried to hold it.

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, it was impossible to catch the

radio

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, I tried to fix the

radio

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, as it was impossible for me to fix. I feel bad

for

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about

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this

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accident so could you please let me know the price of the

radio

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so I

shall

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can

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transfer the amount to you. Hoping for a prompt and positive response from you regarding

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matter. Yours lovingly, Jay

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Coherence And Cohesion

Try to use more varied connective words to enhance the flow between sentences.

Task Achievement

Ensure to maintain a professional yet friendly tone throughout the letter for consistency.

Task Achievement

The letter provides a clear description of the accident and expresses apology and concern effectively.

Coherence And Cohesion

The opening and closing of the letter are well-structured, creating a friendly tone.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accidentally
unfortunately
damaged
sincere apologies
repair
replace
compensation
responsibility
solution
gesture of goodwill
inconvenience
professional service
unintentional
voucher
out of pocket

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